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Is it justifiable when someone uses your own creative idea without any permission? You will feel very offensive when this happened. However we commonly steal other's intellectual property with ease. It is very pervasive that we often download music, movie and essays through internet without any sense of guilt. These are nearly considered as public goods. It is essential to restrict pervasive plagiarism and stealing of other's intellectual property. If not the industry will have bad influence. For essays, it is not advantageous to your ability. Ultimately it is against the social justice.
When you download music and movies by internet without any paying it will discourage the desire of creation for innovators. They will not make creative ideas, music or movies because they do not get a appropriate results. Even if the fee is very little it should be compensate for artists. By that way we can be served by high quality works. It is very fundamental motive for artists.
You sometimes have experience that you plagiarized or downloaded essay for assignment in internet when the deadline is closed. Firstly, this affair is not good for you. You will lose the chance to enhance your ability to write a creative essay. Not only you lose the chance to write but you will also lose the opportunity for thinking and studying that topic.
Lastly it is against the social justice. It is stealing of other's property when you download items via internet without any permission. Not only visible things but also invisible intellectual ideas are one's property. We often neglect ownership of these things just the reason that it is not visible and it is pervasive.
To sum up, we should respect other's intellectual property because it is good for yourself and for nation. Also it is right in social sense. Even though it is very pervasive in our society to steal one's IP, each individual should avoid this affair.
Hello. Just to give you a feedback, you have all the five paragraphs including introduction, three body paragraphs and conclusion and each paragraph has thesis statement. Though, I guess it would have been a better writing if you wrote in similiar magnitude in each paragraph., It seemd it's getting shorter and the conclusion doesn't cleary summarize the points. But overall, I enjoyed reading your essay.
ReplyDeleteHi ! First thing i should say is that I enjoyed reading your essay. You have 3 supporting paragraph to back up your ideas, and it has visible structure. However, I think it would have been better if you had shorter introduction. Also, paraphrasing the 3 ideas of supporting paragraph and summarizing it would add more to your conclusion. Other than that it seems very well written
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