Tuesday, March 31, 2015

201581012/Ji Hyun Lee/How to Develop Self-Confidence/Thursday 56

How to Develop Self-Confidence

Developing confidence is really important these days. No one can say that confidence is of no particular importance. Self-belief has been directly connected to an individual's social network, the activities they participate in and what they hear about themselves from others.  To succeed in all fields, you need buckets of confidence. Actually, there are not many students who have it, so I would like to suggest 3 steps to develop self-confidence.

First, you had better dress up nicely. When you look good, it changes the way you carry yourself and interact with other people. If you like the way you look, this will give you confidence. For example, you won't want to go outside if you don't like the way you look in any cloths. However, if you like your appearance, you will think you should do some special thing like a date. That's what can reasonably be expected.

 Next, you should practice good posture. People with slumped shoulders often are unenthusiastic and don't consider themselves important. Just stand up straight, keep your head up, and make eye contact. You will immediately feel more alert and positive. A person with good posture looks really distinguished, so everyone recognizes his confidence. 

Lastly, I recommend you work out regularly. By working out, you can improve your physical appearance and do something fruitful with your time. Sick people don't seem to be confident at all. Therefore, you would rather manage health care consistently for your confidence and your life.

In summary, you had better be confident for your one and only life. I suggest you to follow these 3 steps which are dress up nicely, take good posture and work out regularly. Now, you just throw away shame, stand up straight and act confident

1 comment:

  1. I read your post well :) I think that also we need live our life with confidence. It's really important. And I absolutely agreed with your statement that appearance leads to our confidence. I also think that if I dress up nicely, my confidence goes up. Now, I will comment you according to the checklist on page 47 and page 58. :)
    I think that your thesis statement well identifies the process because this summarizes what you will tell in the 3 body paragraphs. Also, you included background information saying that confidence is really important in our life.
    Body paragraphs have many details which support each topic sentence well. And you concluded with recommendation and I liked it. You also used logical connectors like 'firstly', 'lastly' and logical connectors like 'therefore',too. So it was good. You included passives in the introduction appropriately, I think. And in the conclusion, you retated 3things that you suggested in the introduction and I liked it. However, if your essay was written in more logical sequence, it would be better :)